ESSAY : COMPARISON / CONTRAST

Instructor Mohd Muzhafa Idrus (Mozac)
English Gold A2
April 6 2010




Dell and Mac users

Computer these days is one of the most important thing in our life . Most people use it permanently and every where . Computers companies aspire to get the most sales of all other companies . For example : Dell and Mac computer companies . Both of them have a great items and people are buying their sales . People are looking forward to have the best items that educates their desires such as : Quality , appearance and price .

People who are interesting in computers for their business choose their computer by quality to have the best business they could have . Dell and Mac have a great reputation in their sales . so these people would go with them first preferred to all other computer companies . Dell starts to increase their quality by the time , so people who are interesting would buy there items . But , designers , businessmen and scientist prefer Mac because it is faster than Dell and avoid the high temperature . Also , Mac computers doesn't allow viruses to risk the computer . In comparison with Dell , Mac has better quality than Dell .

Fashion people who likes aspects and colors when they first looking to buy a computer , they look for the appearance of the computer . They usually ask themselves " Is it beautiful ? " or some of them say " What it my favorite color ? so I can buy computer in the same color . " Both Dell and Mac have different shapes and different sizes . But , Mac has a specific design they make their computers on it . In the other hand , Dell has many designs . Dell provides for these people all what they want . Their is a lot of colors in different shapes and sizes . Dell is similar to a piece of art in their sales . So , people who likes fashion and aspect would go with this option .

Economic crisis hit the world recently . And because of that people are trying to save every penny they get from their job . Finding something cheap is the only matter for these kind of people . I suggest Dell computers for these kind of people . Because if we compare the prices between both company , we will find that Mac is much higher than Dell . Another fact , there is charge for programs and entertainment like games and music . But the opposite in Dell . Dell is cheaper and the programs and entertainment are free . I accept these people to buy Dell computers to save there money .

In conclusion , People have different options and opinion , and they love to go with their choices . These three choices would be the most common choices for the costumer who wants to buy a computer . By comparing the Dell and Mac computers we are going to find some similarities and differences . In my opinion , I like Mac computers more than Dell because I'm one of the people who search for quality , because I don't care about appearance or price .

SECOND DRAFT .. ( Editing ) !

Dell and Mac users

Computers these days are one of the most important thing in our life . most people use it permanently and every where . computers companies are fighting to have the biggest sales of all other companies . For example : Dell and Mac companies . Both of them have a great computers and people are buying their sales . But , there are some people prefer one of the other . People looking for three different things : Quality , shape and how much it will coast them .

People who are interesting in computers for their business choose their computer by quality . Dell and Mac have a great reputation in their sales . But , designers , businessmen and scientist prefer Mac because it is faster than Dell and didn't have a high temperature . Also , Mac computers doesn't allow viruses to attack the computer . In comparison with Mac , Dell has lower quality than Mac .

Fashion people who loves aspects when they first look to buy a computer they look for how the computer look like . They start asking themselves " Is it beautiful ? " or some of them say " What it my favorite color so I can buy computer in the same color ? " Both Dell and Mac have different shapes and different sizes . But , Mac has only a specific design they make their computers on it . In the other hand , Dell has another idea . Dell recommended for these people all what they would . Their is a lot of colors in different shapes and sizes . Dell is similar to a piece of art in their sales . So , people who loves fashion and aspect would go with this option .

Economics in these days is low . People are trying to save every penny they get . Finding something cheap is the only matter for these kind of people . I most likely Dell for these kind of people . Because if we compare the prices between both company , we will find that Mac is much higher than Dell . And , there is a charge for programs and entertainment like games and music . But the opposite in Dell . Dell is cheaper and the programs and entertainment are free . I would aspect for savior people to buy Dell computers .

In conclusion , People have different opinion and options , and they love to go with their choices . These three options would be the more common choices we can see . By comparing the Dell and Mac companies we will find some similarities and differences . In my opinion , I like Mac computer better than Dell because I'm one of the people who search for quality .

FIRST DRAFT .. ( Free writing ) !

Dell and Mac users

Technology these days are one of the most impostant thing in our life . most people use it railably and every where . computers companies are fighting to have the biggest sales of all other companies . For example : Dell and Mac companies . Bothe of them have a great computers and people are buying their sales . But , there are some people prefer one of the other . People looking for three diffrent things : Quality , shape and how much it will coast them .

People who are interesting in computers for their business choose their computer by quality . Dell and Mac have a great reputation in their sales . But , desighners , businessmen and scientist prefer Mac because it is faster than Dell and didn't have a high tempereture . Also , Mac computers doesn't allow vairouses to attack the computer . In comparison with Mac , Dell has lower quality than Mac .

Fashion people who loves aspects when they first look to buy a computer they look for how the computer look like . They start asking themselves " Is it beautiful ? " or some of them say " What it my favorit color so I can buy computer in the same color ? " Both Dell and Mac have diffrent shapes and diffrent sizes . But , Mac has only a specific design they make their computers on it . In the other hand , Dell has another idea . Dell recomended for these people all what they would . Their is a lot of colors in diffrent shapes and sizes . Dell is similar to a piece of art in their sales . So , people who loves fashion and aspect woul go with this option .

Economics in these days is low . People are trying to save every penny they get . Finding something cheape is the only matter for these kind of people . I most likely Dell for these kind of people . Because if we compare the prices between both company , we will find that Mac is much higher than Dell . And , there is a charge for programs and entertainment like games and music . But the opposit in Dell . Dell is cheaper and the programs and entertainment are free . I would aspect for savior people to buy Dell computers .

In conclusion , People have diffrent opinion and options , and they love to go with their choices . These three options would be the more common choises we can see . By comparing the Dell and Mac companies we will find some similiraties and diffrences . In my opinion , I like Mac computer better than Dell because I'm one of the people who search for qualaty .

Outline .. !!

Tittle : Diffrences between living at home and away home .

Introduction : People have divvrent point of view about travel away from home while others like to travel abroad .

Thesis statment : However , people experienced on travel abroad the advanteges and disadvanteges .

Body : Advantage : - Responsibility
- Experience

Disadvantege : - Negative Feeling
: - Hard living

Conclousion : All in all , people will have a benifit if they travel and see others point of view , and expert more interesting things they couldn't see it in their native home .

What I have learned today !!

Today is the 03/10/2010 . Our lesson today about Argumentative Essay .
Since I knew some information about this lesson , it was clear for me to understand what our instructor said .

there is two patterns to this type of essay .

1) Block Pattern
2) Point - By - Point - Pattern

In summaries of what we have learned today about Point - By - Point - Pattern :

* Introduction :

1 ) we first have to introduce the Topic .
2 ) Summarize other person's point of view .
3) Theses statements .

* Body :

A - Statement of the other side's first argument and rebuttal with your own counterargument .
B - Statement of the other side's first argument and rebuttal with your own counterargument .
C - Statement of the other side's first argument and rebuttal with your own counterargument .

Simply , we have to put other people opinion about subject . Then , argue it with your opinion and support your argument with some strong prove .

* Conclusion :
Summary your point of view about what you argue about .
Restate your theses statements .


That's it .

Thanks .

Practice 2 - B , PG 118 ! ( HOMEWORK )

Actually I can't understand this practice , it makes me confused because of the NOTE .
I'll go with the Topic Suggestions .

Two cars

1 - Both Ferrari and Auston Martin are expensive cars .

2 - The Ferrari cars are fast , just as Austin Martin .

3 - Not only Ferrari has two seats but also Austin Martin has .

4 - The Ferrari's engine is similar to Austin Martin's engine .

5 - Neither Ferrari nor Austin Martin are perfect .

Practice 2 - A , PG 117 ! ( HOMEWORK )

2 - The United States and Great Britain operate under a two prty system .

3 - The British Parliament has two separate houses also the United States Congress has .

4 - The U.S. House of Representatives is similer to the British House of Commons .
The U.S. Senate like the British House of Lords .

5 - Both members of the U.S. House of Representatives and British House of Commons are elected by district .

6 - The method of choosing cabinet members in the United States and Great Britain is the same .

7 - In Great Britain , The prime minister appoints the cabinet likewise the U.S. president appoints the cabinet .

8 - The British monarch has the right to veto any law passed by Parliament the same as U.S. president has the right to veto any law by Congress .