Tittle : Diffrences between living at home and away home .
Introduction : People have divvrent point of view about travel away from home while others like to travel abroad .
Thesis statment : However , people experienced on travel abroad the advanteges and disadvanteges .
Body : Advantage : - Responsibility
- Experience
Disadvantege : - Negative Feeling
: - Hard living
Conclousion : All in all , people will have a benifit if they travel and see others point of view , and expert more interesting things they couldn't see it in their native home .
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14 years ago
Good! But I expected more points from you.
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