Saturday, April 17, 2010

Pollution : Its Causes and Effects ( FIRST DRAFT )

Pollution

One day , there were a city called X . This city was beautiful and has a clear air . 15 years later , factories , companies and several things make the country go down . it's crowded and pullouted city in the present day . When you look from the air , you can see the black smook coming out from the factories , and making a dark cloud . when you look at the see , which it is beside the city , you can see the mix of green and black water killing the see life , and when you stand in the middle of the city , you can hear the loud noise from the factories that makes people awake all day .

Air mixed of several elements . The smoke of the factories could change the elements . because the mix of the smook and the clean air could change the persentege of the elements . Air pollution is one of the most dangerous issue in the world because it can effect the living organisms . and they can effect more than that .

Water is everything in this world , it handle more than half the plant . but the pollution killed the life under the see . and that is because of the garbage and sanitation . these things made the see go down. there effect change the color and the smell . and because of that many of the fish and plant are black and didn't grow up so fast .

In conclusion , the diffrent kind of pollution screw our life . in my opinion , I suggest the govrnments to do something with this issue .



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P.S : I didn't use any sources yet , bu I will .

1 comment:

  1. Hi, Ali nice topic but you need to check the following points:
    -Grammar mistakes.
    -Spelling mistakes.
    -Support details.
    -Sources.
    and you need to write more about the topic.That is all and good luck.

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