( Paraphrase 1 )
A NASA physician talked about the cosmonautics problems . Be sure if you will stay farther in the dark , you will slight the comprehensive . The ponderosity and being solitary is another alarmist . ( Clinton , Patrick )
( Paraphrase 2 )
All in all , how will the cosmonautics avoid the self trouble ? Even best relationships decreased if the couple didn’t talk to each others for a long time in a bleakness . Space is limited , narrowness , crowded , and there is no singularity . Although space is unsafe , which made the comprehensive inside the cosmonautics . ( Clinton , Patrick )
( Paraphrase 3 )
Why should we waste our money to discover March while there is a lot of problems inside our earth ? Analyzing the diseases issues , purifying the liquid , pollution , land , and feeding the poor people . Why we should fight outside while we have problems in our planet such as displacement , poorness , and Inertia ? ( Brunish , Cory )
( Paraphrase 4 )
Speed is the most important thing to reach March . The trip could be dangerous enough to kill the cosmonautics if they exposure to the rays , where the losses of the magnetic field leaves the cosmonautics further more from the cosmic energy than they are in hub or in way to the moon . ( Kluger , Jeffrey )
Final draft
14 years ago
Good job! You have done a very good job and used your own work! Keep it up!
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